A song or something like it
Note: I was asked to write a song for a college band. And boy, was I thrilled. The following is my attempt at it. The response I got for it was "This song would be perfect for U2." Trust me, that was meant to be an insult. I like U2, so I didn't feel too bad about it! But don't tell me I didn't warn you. After all, it's a reject. But that didn't damage my ego one bit, which is why I'm shamelessly posting it on my blog for all the world to see.
This thing called Lust
Whoa, the heat’s there
We’re lying bare
Of clothes, or of emotions?
She’s fallen asleep
In thoughts, I’m deep
Contemplating possible premonitions
Without a doubt
Water will put right out
A fire that's ablaze
A desire for danger?
Human instincts of animal nature?
The mind's stuck, in a daze
It’s like in quicksand
You find you’re stuck and
The only way is down
So much for sanity
When you see that she
Is taking off that nightgown
Sex for pleasure
Much beyond measure
Crushing rationale to dust
Such physical passion
A crazy obsession
This thing called Lust
Burning, burning
Burning, burning
Oh, she feels us burning
Burning, burning
Burning, burning
I feel us burning out
Let’s burn!
P.S. - I know it's probably more exciting to think that I have lesbian tendencies, which I might; however, this song was being written for a men-band. (Boy-band sounds so Boyzonish or Backstreetboyish. Not that there's anything wrong with that, but imagine calling Metallica or Pink Floyd a boy-band. Haha! Man, that would get me killed!!! Though the contorted faces of some of my friends would be worth it :D )
posted by LovingAndLosing @ 4:45 am
25 comments
25 Comments:
Men-band??? Yikes. Please don't include Pink Floyd or Metallica in the same paragraph as "men-band".
Anyway...clearly lust is a popular topic with you. And here I thought only nerds in places with an imbalanced gender ratio got this horny.
But what else do you call a band that has all men in it?
As for your second statement... it's hard to find a good man these days :p
I would rap for this and not do a rock or a metal :) good attempt..
now try rapping for this lyrics and u will know what am saying...
Thangu thangu !!!
Damn I thot I cud get to it first...anywayz, sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooper !!! :D:D:D:D:D You know it wudnt get rejetted in my library for sure ;) - on the contrary! It was pretty nice..and RHYMING :D:D:D
And Ms. V, dont worry, there are lotsa muslim hunks arnd - so leave ur supposed tendencies so that some guy will be happy atleast, now tht I have lost my chance ;)
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The search has just begun !!!
if someone can sing this I can put it on some music!
someone.. anyone.. sing and record it on your comp (doesnt matter how bad the quality is..) anything..
[infact if I get two or more vocals, I could mix and match!!]
I'm serious!
Chandna...
What did you eat before you were born man? How the hell did you get so enthu?! (I am complimenting you... these days its better to specify!) I've never seen a person more willing to increase work for himself!
And that was a hot little no. Ms. V! (Note the sexual lusty undertone here)
Apologies to those who were offended by the redundant use of sexual and lusty...
Hey Yohan!
(8)Burn Baby Burn(8)
mew mew mew mew mew mew
(8)Great Balls of Fire(8)
Hmm I wonder why it was rejected though... Duh!! ;)Cheers!!
Anon: Yeah, it makes a good rap song.
RA: Muslim hunks are only good to look at. I want more than that ;) Doesn't my poem tell you anything? :P
Gautam: Hehehe. I agree with Vibes. Seriously, you have way too much enthu! Why don't YOU sing and put it to music? Or if you can come up with a tune for it, I can sing it.
Manoj: Sex need not equal to porn :p But let me know if anyone wants to buy it. The song, I mean. I hear they pay good money ;)
Vibes: Sexual lusty undertone noted. What next? ;)
Vit X: Woof woof!
Jaguu: Maybe they didn't get it. Or they don't get "it". ;)
Chi Chi , a lotta adult people indulging in adult talk here.but hey vids , i tell you , u did real good.even though i may just avoid singing this at a family function , the song is a good piece for the right occasion.ok.im getting outta here.chi chi , talking about sex and all.
Ms V: you're on!!
send me a recording of this.. [or if u dont know how to record, we'll voice chat and I'll record that directly...
dont worry about the quality, I have other plans for this..
muhuhahahhahaha!!!
ooooooooooooh. It was fun reading ur song... seems like u got a lot of unfulfilled desires... well dont know if u can sell this off easily.. but take my word.. if u translate the song into Tamil.. u sure wld have lot of takers.
sweet,hot and sexy.... !!!!!
Manoj: So you mean to say the entire world was discussing porn when talking about the Clinton-Lewinsky case??? :P
Abhi: Well since your blog is so child friendly, I thought it's only fair that the adults get some entertainment too ;) Thanks for the compliment though.
Gautam: But I need a tune first!!! I don't have a tune.
Vishy: Haha! So true. The Tamil industry would just lap it up. After all, everyone still loves 'vaseegara' :D
Vas: Me or the poem? ;)
Reverend: Rage against the Machines?? Sounds like a band I would listen to when I've had a lousy break-up with a lousier boyfriend. *shudder*
you actually got an edit me link on the 'i read regularly' list u dumbo! is it cos u thot it'd be easier to edit the list next time arnd or jus your sense of humor...
as for comments on your current post i better read thru again jus to get the hang of it.. specially since u r goona take my comments seriously...
Quite impressive.
>Sex for pleasure
>Much beyond measure
>Crushing rationale to dust
>Such physical passion
>A crazy obsession
>This thing called Lust
This sounded AWESOME. Could actually hear someone singing it.
>Whoa, the heat’s there
>We’re lying bare
>Of clothes, or of emotions?
>She’s fallen asleep
>In thoughts, I’m deep
>Contemplating possible premonitions
And I thought this had a lot of depth behind it. Not bad, not bad at all.
Keep it up.
ps - I love U2 too. Who doesn't?
Hiren: Well if you write poems, then you'd know that this song is actually written in a style. It follows the aabccb style.
Sandy: It's partly my sense of humour, and partly the fact that it's easier the next time I want to add another link. So dumbo you! And yeah, read it again. Though I don't think it's in your capacity to understand it :p So spare yourself the trouble.
Sahil: As of now, you are my most favourite person in the world!!! I actually HAVE put a lot of thought into this song. I just didn't put down some rhyming words. My favourite part is
It’s like in quicksand
You find you’re stuck and
The only way is down
I don't know why, but I like it! And the line that I actually think is the deepest is Human instincts of animal nature? Did you get what I mean by that?
Sahil: And yes. U2 rocks! EL-EV-A-TION!!!!!!!!!!! :D
'Human instincts of animal nature'
I say to each his own interpretation of the lyrics. That's the beauty of songs by U2.
But to me, that line describes how we sometimes leave our humanity behind, and succumb to our 'animal nature' - that is survival of the fittest, and think only of ourselves, and no one else.
This song was quite an elevation Ms. V ;)
Was juz abt to refer to it last time arnd... Post some more....Someone's listening :)
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The search has just begun !!!
I'm still waaaiiitttinnnggg.... can someone please sing the song and send me a recording?!?!?!?!
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MUHUHAHAHAHAHA!!
i dont think it sounds U2..seems more like Linkin Park rapping..but a good attempt nevertheless !!
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