It's Valen-time!
It's been a while since I showed-off (Personally, I think it should be show-offed, just like how the plural of mom-in-law should be mom-in-laws!) my poetry. Here's one I wrote on Valentine's Day. Enjoy the mush...
Valentine Rhyme
I don’t want jewels; I don’t want gold
I want someone at night to hold
I don’t want cars; I don’t want shoes
I just want hugs and I love you’s
No fancy clothes, or costly gifts
Just smiles and laughs, in spite of rifts
Forget the rose, and lavish dine
Kisses all day will do just fine
Just want a man I can call mine
Darling, will you be my Valentine?
posted by LovingAndLosing @ 4:20 am
24 comments
24 Comments:
Nice!
coollll awesome .....
Strange, but this poem is sorta similar to one I wrote some time back... Check out:
http://deardeepthi.blogspot.com/2005/05/so-happy.html
Anyways been reading your blog regularly for a while :) Keep up the good work :)
Thats sweet.I think I will be free on the 14th.
Thanks Missy.
Of course, thanks to you too Vasanth, my regular fan :D
Deeps, that is freakishly similar!! Especially in scheme and style and idea of poem. My sis goes by the nick name 'Dips'! Coincidences... Thanks for your compliments :)
Achcha, Abhinav. Ab headache-veadache nahi hai? If it was this simple, you should have let me know before. Aur poems likhoon kya? :p
Hmm...so thats what they really want?
Of course...should have known. When they are asking for gifts and stuff it is not what they really want...thats how women are!
Neway glad I could inspire you!!!!
sweet! but why compromise? you'll get jewels, gold, cars. shows, clothes, costly gifts, roses, and dinners AND ME!!
Hi!!
I am 22 years young, handsome, sweet, want to be making frands with sweet innocent (!!) simple girl settled in caneeda! .. age no bar, caste now bar, sex bar bar!
Only genuine parties should apply...
Hey Vikas, you being sarcastic?? :p
Oh Vibes, me is genuine party. We'll have fun and there'll be cake. Sex baar baar, how much times?
She's so vulnerable!
Oh so vulnerable!
;) :)
WHERE WERE YOU WHEN I NEEDED THE POETRY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Hehehe. I am vulnerable, ain't I? ;)
And I've been here all along, Gautam. You weren't looking.
I've been needing it every valentines day for the past.. umm.. 21 YEARS!.. [replace with a corny dialogue implying misfortune with women]
Hahaha! Oh well, looks like Feb. 14, 2006 is going to be your lucky year! ;)
damn i shud prob hav been the first to comment...but wht to do...choo chweeeet.
I never "needed" any poetry, but I wud hav put this to good use ;)
You juz bring out the girl in u sometimes...no wonder poetry brings out the person...rather than just the external morphed personality.
V for Ms V, V for Valentine, V for victory and this is the V year of the century. what coincidences also :)
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The search has just begun !!!
Not to mention V is the only letter that is written in singular but pronounced as a plural, and also has a partner (VV) ;)
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The search has just begun !!! (for thinkin of such useless facts)
Ra....you also got this habbit now.. hehehe...and well Miss V does not know abt me being 'VV' so solpa silent madi...
RA, if I want a steady flow of compliments from you, all I need to do is keep writing poetry, right? :D
V for versatile, vivacious, vociferous and so much more! ;)
Vas, what do you mean??? Explain! :P Btw, I know a few Kannada words, so don't think you can get away with it! ;)
Well vasanth, it was not abt u or anything related to what i rote anywhere else:P Btw, for further explanations, look here.
And yeah Ms V, that really touches my heart and the very core, esp when it rhymes, i go eeeeee :D
But if its bad, u wud have ur first thrashing from me :P
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@Ra.. kovuthutiye machi.... engappan kudhirukulla illa kadhai ayiduche...
@ VV - even i only solpa gothu...so was not trying any thing smart after my prior espaneol experience with you :D
Not sarcastic but truthful...and confessionate. (I have a patent pending for that word!)
Thanks, Prashant.
I'm sure you do, Vikas! :p
February 14th Already?
Must've fallen alseep.
Tawakley...I see you're still at it (bar bar).
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